solutions i could not identify;
all contents emptied into a
mixture of base, acid remarks.
under heat, melt our memories with
every promise that you did not keep.
leave it to cool until we crystallize
listing all possible sources of error upon
observation, my attempt to deduce
what was limiting yielded no result
through experimenting with you, an
iota of uncertainties compounded into a
meld of miscalculations, mistaking
effervescence for true love,
the irreversibility of my reaction
only precipitated the end point.
let me distill the complexity of
emotions down
to palpable loss as
you fully dissociate yourself from
our past, becoming volatile
upon turning point
going through my corrections, my
only conclusion is the need for control.
probably my favorite so far. although i had the idea of using chemistry as a motif for the longest time, courtesy of the love of my life h2 chem heh , i didn’t really know how i was going to go about creating a piece that would encapsulate my sentiments. it was such a struggle to complete this but i’m glad i somewhat managed to pull it off.
Well penned.🌼
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That took me right back to chemistry lessons!
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glad it did :”)
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I really like this. Like a calculated experiment that didn’t go exactly as expected, the science of discovery and reflection. It’s well…formulated.
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thank you so much :”)
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i love this :’) weaving an academic theme into my poetry is something i’ve attempted but not very well haha. you did it perfectly!
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aw thank you so much, i feel really flattered :’) recently, i discovered how much i enjoy experimenting with academic themes. it’s just quite refreshing to see chemistry from a different perspective yknow
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omg ana you got great pen skills 🔥
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HAHAHAHA omo thank you so much
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Ana, you wrote this composition extremely well and a very creative device for metaphor. Actually, It is very, very unique that you did in fact capture the thematic essence word for word, phrase for phrase, and your use of language and the written word a superior force in this literary world. Stay Creative!!!
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wow thank you so much for the kind words :”) i’m glad you are able to appreciate it as this was quite a challenge to pull off.
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Just keep writing. And, you are quite welcome. Enjoy your day. Blessings.
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Very interesting content you have here and so captivating.
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thank you so much :”)
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